I'm also thankful for my parents. If it weren't for them I would be here, literally. My parents are the greatest. They're always supportive of me and they take good care of me. Yes, they do get annoying from time to time, but I'm very grateful for them. My parents give me some great advice which can really help me in the future. My parents have introduced me to amazing music and I'm very grateful for that, as well. My parents pay for basically everything that I need and even things that I don't need, so I'm very grateful for that. My parents have made many sacrifices for my sister and I. My parents care about my education as much as I do. They push me to do well in school so I can have a good future and get out of their hair. My parents really care about me and I care about them too. I'm very grateful that I have the amazing parents that I do.
Lastly, I'm thankful for my older sister. She's a very weird person but I love her. I can tell her pretty much everything without her "snitching" on me. My sister also gives me some helpful life lessons and advice about things she's experienced. She helps me through a lot. My sister and I, have many differences, but we still love each other. She keeps her room dirty, while I keep my room organized. We have many memories together. Funny memories and some bad memories. We hardly argue anymore which is a positive. She's a good person, just don't get on her bad side. All in all, I love my sister no matter what and I'm grateful that I have an older sister to learn from.
I commented on Tammi's blog.
I think you did a really good job! You gave many reasons in each paragraph as to why you're thankful for having these people in your life. But you might have to revise in paragraph 1, you put "She's really made an impact on my life and I lover her." I think you just need to erase the R in "lover", and then paragraph 1 would be really good. Also, in paragraph 2, you put "If it weren't for them I would be here, literally." I think you meat to put "If it weren't for them, I wouldn't be here, literally." But other than those two small mistakes I think you did a really great job on your blog! It can help people understand why you're really thankful for these people, great job!
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